Lighting is generally good, background is great, subject is great, but the poses are way too staged- a suit jacket with riding togs? Really? Because I think that is ridiculous. When exactly DOES a person recline on a wooden cart, (though that is my favorite shot)and who sits on a chair that way? What is Jorge doing with his right hand in the first shot--even he doesn't know what to do with it. It would have been better to have given him something to do in the shots that was natural. And for god sake can't we see a genuine smile! The shots are technically ok, but they strip him of personality. The guy is smart, emotionally strong and he has a good sense of humor- can you see any of that here? No. They turned him into every other dower model on the planet. Keep the second shot because it's the best one of it's type. Scrap the rest and try again.
last two photoshoot, the best than ever!!!
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Lighting is generally good, background is great, subject is great, but the poses are way too staged- a suit jacket with riding togs? Really? Because I think that is ridiculous. When exactly DOES a person recline on a wooden cart, (though that is my favorite shot)and who sits on a chair that way? What is Jorge doing with his right hand in the first shot--even he doesn't know what to do with it. It would have been better to have given him something to do in the shots that was natural. And for god sake can't we see a genuine smile! The shots are technically ok, but they strip him of personality. The guy is smart, emotionally strong and he has a good sense of humor- can you see any of that here? No. They turned him into every other dower model on the planet. Keep the second shot because it's the best one of it's type. Scrap the rest and try again.
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